Hi Angelica, I'm commenting on the final, since I didn't make it in time for the draft :) This is a cute poster, but from your teammates' comments, I can tell that it probably should be clearer. Keep in mind that the poster is a "coming of age" poster...that's why Melissa was talking about a before and after and showing change. I think the metaphor is a bit unclear...when I looked at it, I thought the drops were rain because the water cycle and rain adds to the oceans...thus the "product" is the ocean. But I can see where Mel thought they were teardrops. I am also not too sure how this relates to coming of age...again, that idea of change...I don't really see how the poster shows that. It seems like the part that best shows coming of age are the words in the ocean...so you need to show how you "got there"... LMK if you have questions mrs s
Hi Angelica,
ReplyDeleteI'm commenting on the final, since I didn't make it in time for the draft :)
This is a cute poster, but from your teammates' comments, I can tell that it probably should be clearer.
Keep in mind that the poster is a "coming of age" poster...that's why Melissa was talking about a before and after and showing change.
I think the metaphor is a bit unclear...when I looked at it, I thought the drops were rain because the water cycle and rain adds to the oceans...thus the "product" is the ocean. But I can see where Mel thought they were teardrops. I am also not too sure how this relates to coming of age...again, that idea of change...I don't really see how the poster shows that.
It seems like the part that best shows coming of age are the words in the ocean...so you need to show how you "got there"...
LMK if you have questions
mrs s